This is so good! I would have added the scene where in the battle when the beaver is telling him to leave the war zone and leave peter to fight for himself he says no and runs back to defend him. This ultimately ends with him getting stabbed in the arm.
You did an amazing job at describing word for word what was going on throughout Narnia, in Edmunds world. I think you could have done a better job of describing some of the relationships that Peter made with people. Other than that it was a very good Fakebook.
I think you did a really good job with making sure Edmund explained things that happened during his time at Narnia. I think you could have enhanced some situations more, and explained a little more detail but overall i think you did really good!
This is so good! I would have added the scene where in the battle when the beaver is telling him to leave the war zone and leave peter to fight for himself he says no and runs back to defend him. This ultimately ends with him getting stabbed in the arm.
ReplyDeleteYou did an amazing job at describing word for word what was going on throughout Narnia, in Edmunds world. I think you could have done a better job of describing some of the relationships that Peter made with people. Other than that it was a very good Fakebook.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job with making sure Edmund explained things that happened during his time at Narnia. I think you could have enhanced some situations more, and explained a little more detail but overall i think you did really good!
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